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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by Betrayal on Sat Jul 15, 2017 3:39 pm

Nice find shade. I gotta get better at seeking out these stories myself.
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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by fuckmymomplease on Mon Jul 17, 2017 2:15 am


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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by Nebic on Mon Jul 17, 2017 4:01 pm

Hey, guys, Nebic here. I figured since I had a new cuck/bully story up I'd share it. I'm not sure how many of you are familiar with my work, but it can be ... on the darker side of the spectrum.

Either way, I'd love if you guys gave it a look, and let me know what you thought. Very Happy

https://storieswithnebic.wordpress.com/2017/07/10/the-bully-from-hell/
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Post by BullyBobby on Mon Jul 17, 2017 4:05 pm

Nebic wrote:Hey, guys, Nebic here. I figured since I had a new cuck/bully story up I'd share it. I'm not sure how many of you are familiar with my work, but it can be ... on the darker side of the spectrum.

Either way, I'd love if you guys gave it a look, and let me know what you thought.  Very Happy

https://storieswithnebic.wordpress.com/2017/07/10/the-bully-from-hell/

Welcome Nebic! Yeah, you're mentioned a decent bit on here.

I can't speak for everyone, but I have always personally enjoyed the darker aspects of ntr, some may disagree, but I enjoy the harshness of your writing. Bully from Hell seems to be off to a good start!

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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by Betrayal on Mon Jul 17, 2017 4:35 pm

Thanks Nebic. I love the brutal psychological warfare you wage against the cucks in your stories, it's just the scat/homoerotic stuff that turns me off a lil. That being said keep up the great work, you have a legion of fans that love you!
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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by john01824 on Mon Jul 17, 2017 5:25 pm

Nebic wrote:Hey, guys, Nebic here. I figured since I had a new cuck/bully story up I'd share it. I'm not sure how many of you are familiar with my work, but it can be ... on the darker side of the spectrum.

Either way, I'd love if you guys gave it a look, and let me know what you thought.  Very Happy

https://storieswithnebic.wordpress.com/2017/07/10/the-bully-from-hell/


Love the first chapter and look forward to future installments. Thank you for all the wonderful work.

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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by hop664 on Tue Jul 18, 2017 1:18 am

I like the plot, but hate how you consistently keep things ambiguous with sex scenes. Would sure like to know the details of what happened in the bedroom but judging by similar parts of Messy Roommate, I'm expecting you'll keep it open to interpretation.

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Post by forever316 on Tue Jul 18, 2017 1:29 am

hop664 wrote:I like the plot, but hate how you consistently keep things ambiguous with sex scenes. Would sure like to know the details of what happened in the bedroom but judging by similar parts of Messy Roommate, I'm expecting you'll keep it open to interpretation.

Well then you are going to love chapter 2

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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by Betrayal on Tue Jul 18, 2017 12:11 pm

Really loved Chapter 1 Nebic.

Hop I feel you but that scene with the mom just looking at her son and then closing the door behind her was INCREDIBLY hot to me. Anything could be going on in there which serves to torment the cuck son even more; his imagination is his worst enemy, he's a huge pervert who deep down would love to see his bully fuck both his mom and sister so keeping it ambiguous at least in the first chapter was a good move imo. The only fault with ch1 was (maybe I missed it) I wish the mom's looks were described with a bit more detail. It's not that big a deal but the mom's looks are very important in a story for me.

Besides that I think it's Nebic's best mom ntr opening chapter so far.
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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by mathew elizabeth on Tue Jul 18, 2017 8:40 pm

Yeah. I Gotta say. Excellent job Nebic. I haven't been this excited for a new chapter release in a while. The first chapter of "The Bully from Hell' is one of the best first chapters I've ever read. The ending of the chapter is what really made it for me and its making me ache to see what happens next.

You are a great story teller and you touch on taboo levels in such vivid detail. Your stories are a roller coaster ride. They are terrifying and humiliating with such erotic angst, and a reader with reasonable intelligence and sanity knows they will return to the real world when they are done reading your story. Its very different to disturbing film's such as 'Funny Games' or 'Salo' because the realistic visuals and plot context make them none erotic. However, with mere words based through eroticism it sends different social and sexual triggers in different audiences minds.

I've mentioned 'Sammy's Ruined Life' before and it's a good example of what I'm saying. The ending is so cruel, but it potentially puts readers in Sammy's shoes, readers that are capable to imagine and empathise more so than others. The terrifying erotic ending with the fear of death and isolation (Oh god it's giving shivers! That fucking ending!) is like a ruined orgasm for the main character; but us as readers betray and actually climax to deal with the terror of it all....pure genius.

I'm expecting the same sort of thing in "The Bully from Hell".

Nebic announced that Chapter 2 will be released on the 24th of July. Thought id tell those who didn't know. I simply can't wait! Very Happy
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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by forever316 on Wed Jul 19, 2017 12:34 pm

mathew elizabeth wrote:

Nebic announced that Chapter 2 will be released on the 24th of July. Thought id tell those who didn't know. I simply can't wait! Very Happy

If you donate to his Patreon he already released Chapter 2.

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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by Nebic on Wed Jul 19, 2017 10:55 pm

Well hot damn, guys, I didn't expect this much feedback! Thanks to you all for the support and I've actually got a surprise for you, I'm going to be releasing chapter 2 on the 21st instead of the 24th.

I didn't like that my release window was at the start of the work week, rather than the start of the weekend. This way you'll get it and have the weekend to enjoy it, rather than Monday.

Also thanks to anyone who's joined my Patreon, you guys rock! Like many writers, the comments are what keep me going, so it's so nice to hear from you. Very Happy
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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by Jman1012 on Fri Jul 21, 2017 11:14 am

Really enjoyed the first part looking forward to the second, keep it up Nebic.

Found two new stories on literotica.

https://www.literotica.com/s/friends-of-the-younger-variety (A sexually deprived wife finds company in her son's friends.)

https://www.literotica.com/s/its-just-a-joke-sweetie-pt-01 (The star football player takes his classmate's mom on a date.)

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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by mathew elizabeth on Sat Jul 22, 2017 4:51 pm

Nebic has released chapter 2 of 'The Bully from Hell'! Wow, what an amazing ride! It took me a while to post a review because I read it before I went to sleep.

This chapter had unbelievable build up. This includes the anticipation for the climax of part 2, and I won't spoil too much, but I have to mention this, the 'ass worshiping scene'. That ass worshiping scene was so well written and obscene. It actually sent triggers into my brain that has made curious about 'girls licking guys asses'; only good writing can do that.

Nebic's writing doesn't need to be defended by any means, however, I do remember someone commenting on the minimal description of the characters appearances. It's true, heavy descriptions of key character appearances can help greatly, but also minimal description can help readers personalise themselves or their own lives into the mix. For example, I can easily imagine the main character as myself, and put myself into his shoes 'quantum leap' style. Chet is a slightly more confident and successful 'Ryan'; a true social bully in my younger life; and I imagine 'Chet' taking on Ryan's 19-year-old image. I can easily imagine the mother as my own mother and Sandy is like the evil sister I never had with the image of young 'Olivia Newton John' from 'Grease' LOL. It's similar to why I keep the town, company's and characters last names mostly ambiguous in my stories.

This is easily going to go into my top three stories very soon! Ill be making an edit on that list in that other thread. Well done Nebic! Ill be paying a few bills and stuff myself first but Ill be glad to help with your Patreon. I ask many other fans to do the same! He deserves it.

PS: Also Nebic, out of curiosity, I was wondering if you wanted to add to that thread your own top three stories. Be great to get many writers and readers opinions.

Thanks again, can't wait for chapter 3!

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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by Betrayal on Sat Jul 22, 2017 6:37 pm

This is kinda a weird story but it's about a son pretty much stalking his mom, watching her be a slut. No incest as far as I know. Check out the super butthurt comments for extra lols
https://www.literotica.com/s/moms-in-town
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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by livingwithhotmom on Sun Jul 23, 2017 12:30 am

Sorry if these have been posted before. Surprisingly, xhamster is a good place for findhing some stories like these:

White Man Fucks my Muslim Arab Mother
https://xhamster.com/stories/white-man-fucks-my-muslim-arab-mother-573487

Watching My Asian Mother Get Bred by a White Man
https://xhamster.com/stories/watching-my-asian-mother-get-bred-by-a-white-man-572863

The Descent into Cuckoldry
https://xhamster.com/stories/the-descent-into-cuckoldry-675048



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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by Cuckson on Fri Jul 28, 2017 2:04 am

not sure if anyone noticed, but I have posted new conflicted work - chapter 10 amd start of 11 - http://bullyrebuild.forumotion.com/t70-conflicted

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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by Zohan on Fri Jul 28, 2017 4:28 am

Hi Cuckson,
I enjoyed reading Chapter 10 and 11-1a. I did not want to leave a message on the thread that would spoil the continuity when the next update is posted.
I loved the way Coleen gets involved and understands the affair. This is an unexpected surprise in the story line. Prevents it from being too predictable.
I can't wait to read the rest.

Thank you so much for posing the stories here.
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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by maedopedro on Sun Jul 30, 2017 8:31 pm

You guys need to check a reddit user called /u/PAPorn, he makes scripts for /r/gonewildaudio and most of them are on this kink. There's at least two that have been made where a mom fucks her son's friend in front of him. He doesn't seem to be into the bully thing, though, it's more about the son's friend.


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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by Zohan on Sun Jul 30, 2017 9:09 pm

There is a new story up on Literotica

Gloria's Trailer Park Trials by TheDarkCloud
Overprotective mother confronts son's bully

https://www.literotica.com/s/glorias-trailer-park-trials
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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by Betrayal on Sun Jul 30, 2017 9:18 pm

Nice find Zohan. It seems to be a latina momXWhite bully story. We need more like that.
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Re: Stories you wrote or found.

Post by loserson on Wed Aug 09, 2017 11:08 am

hey guys,
I found a few new stories , I don't know if you gave read those before but here is the link
http://sexychatwithsharon.com/fetishcorner/?s=mother

operation dom mom- about a mother who punish son for being a racist by cuckolding and humiliating him. The audio of mom talking is also there.

other stories I have not read yet, so check them out if you like.

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