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Post by BullyBobby on Sun Sep 24, 2017 9:10 am

Hey guys, so last night I decided to start writing my first story, one of which I hope to make into a multi-part series.

The only thing is that there's a bit of a distinction between this and others on this forum. Mine isn't a traditionally told 3rd or even 1st person story, it's more of a script than anything.

I recently came across this subreddit called "GoneWild Audio" where people will sometimes post script offers, and other generous individuals will read those scripts, in character, for free on their soundgasm pages. Ain't that grand?

Anyway, I'm going to link you guys to my post on the subreddit, the link to the script is at the bottom of that post. Feel free to give it a read and if you like it, give the post an upvote and a comment so hopefully one of the more talented voice actresses on there will give it a read.

The more popular it is, the more likely someone will give it a shot, so flood that fucker with positivity. We all benefit from this, you see?!

The Reddit Post: https://www.reddit.com/r/gonewildaudio/comments/724nqj/script_offer_good_mommy_gone_bad_part_1_f4m_age/?st=j7yt9bfp&sh=82cd3fec


Soundgasm Examples:

https://soundgasm.net/u/sassmastah77/F4M-The-Patient-Part-Two

https://soundgasm.net/u/belle_in_the_woods/F4M-Sex-Addict-Business-Woman-Uses-Fit-MILFs-Boytoy-Fit-MILF-In-Yoga-Pants-Series-older-womandirty-talkbig-cockanalmultiple-creampiesbeggingcheatingkissing-script-by-uMasaki_12-also-Celebrating-my-Cake-Day

https://soundgasm.net/u/JayeWilde/mommy-sides-with-your-rival


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Re: Story - Good Mommy Gone Bad

Post by Betrayal on Sun Sep 24, 2017 4:45 pm

I already posted some support in the thread there. Hopefully Jaye or someone else does the voice for you! Really want to see (hear) this one.

Oh and you guys might not believe me but that rival story script was written by me. Yep it's based on the supermilf in my avy Danica collins. I'm no writer but occasionally watching her videos I get the urge to write mom ntr stuff and I said what the hell why not request it on GWA. Not going to make a habit of it but I'm grateful Jaye deciced to do it!
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Post by BullyBobby on Sun Sep 24, 2017 4:52 pm

Betrayal wrote:I already posted some support in the thread there. Hopefully Jaye or someone else does the voice for you! Really want to see (hear) this one.

Oh and you guys might not believe me but that rival story script was written by me. Yep it's based on the supermilf in my avy Danica collins. I'm no writer but occasionally watching her videos I get the urge to write mom ntr stuff and I said what the hell why not request it on GWA. Not going to make a habit of it but I'm grateful Jaye deciced to do it!

Well holy shit dude, nice going! Yeah, my only concern is that Jaye doesn't have a tendency to do super long scripts like this one, in general I have worries that due to its length, it'll cause most to be averse from giving it a try. But hey, we'll see.

Jaye is fantastic though, out of the three voices I listed, she's probably the one with the least limits which particularly intrigues me about her. She also just has that "MILF voice", believe she referenced herself to be an actual mother at one point in one of her posts.

I don't expect Sass to do it considering she's basically been AWOL since July, though I think she's absolutely brilliant.

I'm also not certain as to whether Belle would be interested. I know she doesn't mind age, and she's very into dirty talking based on her countless recordings, but I have no clue as to what her interest is in the NTR genre.

I don't know, we'll see I guess. Fingers crossed!

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Re: Story - Good Mommy Gone Bad

Post by Devetak on Sun Sep 24, 2017 9:24 pm

They do some great work there.

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Post by BullyBobby on Tue Sep 26, 2017 2:14 am

Hey, so a very generous individual over at https://hung2myknees.tumblr.com/ just gave the story a plug which is absolutely awesome!

Check out his tumblr if you haven't already, a lot of great stuff over there.

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Re: Story - Good Mommy Gone Bad

Post by Karl Hungus on Tue Sep 26, 2017 10:16 pm

Whats up BullyBobby, this is the guy from the hung2myknees tumblr. I was glad to give you a little plug, hopefully, it got you some upvotes.

I just posted a script to Gonewildaudo as well that has all the similar themes you guys here enjoy. Go check it out here,

https://www.reddit.com/r/gonewildaudio/comments/72pdhw/script_offerf4m_busty_milf_shows_her_son_why/

Hope you all enjoy reading it at least and maybe we if we all work together we can convince some of these babes to give into their bully desires and do some of these recordings.

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Post by Greatest-Love on Tue Sep 26, 2017 11:06 pm

I'm so glad that you guys are helping this genre finally reach GWA. I had few audios in this subject commissioned by one of the users there and it was well worth it. I definitely want to try to get into writing some scripts as well. Love both of your scripts, hopefully they get recorded!

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Post by Karl Hungus on Wed Sep 27, 2017 9:59 am

Greatest-Love wrote:I'm so glad that you guys are helping this genre finally reach GWA. I had few audios in this subject commissioned by one of the users there and it was well worth it. I definitely want to try to get into writing some scripts as well. Love both of your scripts, hopefully they get recorded!

Thanks man! You should make this comment over on the audiogonewild subreddit. The more comments and upvotes, the more attention it will bring to the recording artists. You should definitely write a script yourself, it's pretty fun once you get started. I'd love to see more of this genre all over the place.

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Post by Greatest-Love on Wed Sep 27, 2017 12:45 pm

I just left a comment and I upvoted. I hope it gets some attention. I do think I'll write a script fairly soon, as I have a big list of ideas for stories or scripts, most of them in this category.

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Re: Story - Good Mommy Gone Bad

Post by spikygreen cactus on Thu Sep 28, 2017 1:33 pm

Very similar to one of SlutWriter's stories, I'm wondering if you were inspired by him.

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Re: Story - Good Mommy Gone Bad

Post by BullyBobby on Thu Sep 28, 2017 2:05 pm

spikygreen cactus wrote:Very similar to one of SlutWriter's stories, I'm wondering if you were inspired by him.

I have an immense respect for SlutWriter and how he can continue to make things sound new and fresh while still working within the same genre. As it was my first story, I emulated a few aspects a tiny bit for sure.

That said, I've always been a fan of that sort of aggressive/submissive dynamic with vulgarity laden vernacular to go with it.

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Post by BullyBobby on Thu Sep 28, 2017 2:08 pm

Also, good news! Jayewilde said that she intends to do the script soon! Apparently one of you fine people contacted her with a request, so by the time I messaged her, she had already added the script to her list.

It doesn't surprise me at all given her attraction to darker themes.

One thing, at the moment she's dealing with scheduling conflicts so this will require some patience, but the important thing is that it's coming!

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Re: Story - Good Mommy Gone Bad

Post by spikygreen cactus on Thu Sep 28, 2017 2:43 pm

One issue I have with a lot of these audio scripts is that only the woman talks, which takes away from the immersion.

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Post by Betrayal on Thu Sep 28, 2017 3:01 pm

Awesome! And yeah I wish we could get a voice for the son/bull but that's maybe asking a bit too much. Guess she could get her husband/bf/friends to do the male voices, but at the same time it'd be probably be cheesy too. I don't know, have there been any male voices in these GWA audios? Were they well done?
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Post by BullyBobby on Thu Sep 28, 2017 3:25 pm

I'd have to rewrite the thing and it'd most likely change it from a 40 minute audio into and hour +. That additional time would probably make it less attractive to perform, I'd rather not mess with it.

I think it'll be fine as it is, the audios aren't for everyone sadly.

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Post by Karl Hungus on Thu Sep 28, 2017 4:16 pm

spikygreen cactus wrote:One issue I have with a lot of these audio scripts is that only the woman talks, which takes away from the immersion.

I love this aspect of it. It lets my imagination fill in the blanks and is more stimulating that way. At least for me, it is.

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Post by Betrayal on Thu Sep 28, 2017 4:55 pm

BullyBobby wrote:I'd have to rewrite the thing and it'd most likely change it from a 40 minute audio into and hour +. That additional time would probably make it less attractive to perform, I'd rather not mess with it.

I think it'll be fine as it is, the audios aren't for everyone sadly.

That's absolutely fine. Like I said it'd be kinda cheesy to hear guys in these recordings tbh. I mean it's the female's voice that turns us on anyway. Very Happy

Not making any promises, and I'll think I'll wait for your requests to be filled, but I might try to do another script myself. This one would be an accented story about a latina mom fucking her son's white bully. There's plenty of people that do accents on GWA, hopefully there'll be one that's interested in a mom ntr/raceplay script. Definitely going to put more effort into it then my first script. First thing is finding a woman to base it off of, that's what motivates me to write anything.
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Post by Karl Hungus on Thu Sep 28, 2017 5:07 pm

Betrayal wrote:That's absolutely fine. Like I said it'd be kinda cheesy to hear guys in these recordings tbh. I mean it's the female's voice that turns us on anyway. Very Happy

Not making any promises, and I'll think I'll wait for your requests to be filled, but I might try to do another script myself. This one would be an accented story about a latina mom fucking her son's white bully. There's plenty of people that do accents on GWA, hopefully there'll be one that's interested in a mom ntr/raceplay script. Definitely going to put more effort into it then my first script. First thing is finding a woman to base it off of, that's what motivates me to write anything.

If you're looking for a Latina mom, might I suggest Miriam Gonzalez. https://i.imgur.com/4T7eA.jpg

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Post by Betrayal on Thu Sep 28, 2017 9:11 pm

Thanks. Yeah maybe I'll use her but first I gotta see who does good latina accents on GWA Razz
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