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Post by BullyBobby on Fri Jul 14, 2017 10:26 pm

If you can't find anywhere that will allow you to post your new chapters uncensored, feel free to put them here!

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Post by nemo on Sat Jul 15, 2017 1:58 pm

The first twelve parts of your story are still available on the Wayback Machine:
https://web.archive.org/web/20161016083225/http://www.asstr.org:80/files/Authors/mathewelizabeth/
That's from November, apparently the last time your page was archived.

asstr,org was down for everybody earlier this week, giving Internal Server Error responses on everybody's story pages. It feels like there was a software or hardware outage and they weren't able to completely restore the site. I doubt that you were intentionally targeted in any way (though I have no inside information). I wouldn't rule out a cyberattack or some sort.

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Post by Devetak on Sun Jul 16, 2017 1:24 pm

I'm really sorry about that, dude. I feel like ASSTR is going to go under at some point, it'll be hard blow for erotica on the internet.

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Post by mathew elizabeth on Sun Aug 27, 2017 12:52 am

I've posted chapter 15 on sexstories.com if you guys were interested in re-reading.

http://www.sexstories.com/story/82839/
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Post by forever316 on Mon Aug 28, 2017 7:58 am

mathew elizabeth wrote:I've posted chapter 15 on sexstories.com if you guys were interested in re-reading.

http://www.sexstories.com/story/82839/

I had almost forgotten how good of a writer you are. I enjoyed re-reading that, I cant wait for the next chapter

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Post by nemo on Mon Sep 04, 2017 11:13 am

The asstr.org server has been rebuilt and is online, including all chapters of Mommy's Love Denied
https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/mathewelizabeth/
However, I haven't tried logging in since I don't have an author account there.

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Post by mathew elizabeth on Tue Sep 05, 2017 6:18 am

Thankyou so much for letting me know! Smile I can pretty much say now that I'm around the half-way point in my story. Chapter 16 is going to be a very abstract chapter; centering around the 'mindfuck' that Scott recieves during the erotic clip he purchased. It will be a introspective chapter that will jump between Scott, Ryan and Penny's perspectives as usual. There will be a lot of flashbacks in chapter 16. In particular, it will FINALLY show Scott's nervous breakdown from him witnessing Penny and Ryan's passionate sex for the first time.


From then on, chapters will be more episodic and deal with different erotic situation Scott is denied through Ryan and Penny. Im thinking of introducing elements of sissyfication and some homoeroticism through cuckoldry. But it will never stray too far from the main themes of 'Mommys Love Denied'. (Small stuff; like Penny kissing a teenage girl in front of Ryan. Scott is given small penis humiliation and jerk off instructions from both Penny and Ryan separately and together.)  

I feel I need to shake things up as I am suffering from writters block and having trouble thinking up new ideas. Though my story is fiction; names and certain situations are factual to my life. Ryan was always my 'social bully' at school and the names and descriptions of my friends and mother are legitimate. Maybe I will take more liberties from my life when thinking up new ideas for this story. Im bisexual in real life and am thinking of subtly implying it into the story by being inspired by real life situations and holidays I have yet to write about. What do you guys think?
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Post by nemo on Tue Sep 05, 2017 4:02 pm

Perhaps Scott meets a friendly girl and brings her home, but Penny and Ryan seduce her away from him. I could also see Penny getting hot and heavy with Miss Bunda.

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Post by efan804 on Wed Sep 06, 2017 10:34 pm

mathew elizabeth wrote:it will FINALLY show Scott's nervous breakdown from him witnessing Penny and Ryan's passionate sex for the first time.
That's great, I think most readers have probably been waiting for that moment. So how will it happen? will Penny and Ryan be aware they are being watched? or maybe only Ryan/Penny? or neither of them? It think each variation could be quite erotic in its own way. Especially if you add sissyfication/SPH/etc, which hasn't been used in this story yet, this could only make it hotter IMO.
Glad to see you're still working on this story.

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